Ielts academic Writing Task 2


In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people



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IELTS Academic Writing Task 2 (Simon)

In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people 
make? Has this been a positive or negative development?
It is true that new technologies have had an influence on communication between 
people. Technology has affected relationships in various ways, and in my opinion 
there are both positive and negative effects. 
Technology has had an impact on relationships in business, education and social 
life. Firstly, telephones and the Internet allow business people in different countries to 
interact without ever meeting each other. Secondly, services like Skype create new 
possibilities for relationships between students and teachers. For example, a student 
can now take video lessons with a teacher in a different city or country. Finally, many 
people use social networks, like Facebook, to make new friends and find people who 
share common interests, and they interact through their computers rather than face to 
face. 
On the one hand, these developments can be extremely positive. Cooperation between 
people in different countries was much more difficult when communication was 
limited to written letters or telegrams. Nowadays, interactions by email, phone or 
video are almost as good as face-to-face meetings, and many of us benefit from these 
interactions, either in work or social contexts. On the other hand, the availability of 


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new communication technologies can also have the result of isolating people and 
discouraging real interaction. For example, many young people choose to make 
friends online rather than mixing with their peers in the real world, and these ‘virtual’ 
relationships are a poor substitute for real friendships. 
In conclusion, technology has certainly revolutionised communication between 
people, but not all of the outcomes of this revolution have been positive. 
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