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This technology development essay would get a high score as it fully
answers the question and fully extends and supports the ideas presented. 
Even though the essay does not specifically choose one side as presented in
the technology development essay prompt, it presents a very clear opinion /
position directly related to the question, and then supports this in the essay. 
Also, earlier and more recent developments are compared and discussed. 
You may have noted the length is 356 words. Some higher level candidates
can reach this length in the test, but if you have more difficultly with your
writing you should of course seek to aim for around 275 words (the
minimum is 250 words).
You can still get a high score with 275 words, providing of course it is
scores highly for the four marking criteria in the grading system (Task
Response; Coherence and Cohesion; Lexical Resource; Grammatical
Range and Accuracy). 

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Dying Languages Essay
Dying languages essays have appeared in the IELTS test on several
occasions. 
Languages are dying out all the time. The result of this is a world with
fewer languages. This is a good thing for people everywhere.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
This is about the way that more and more people are speaking the same
language, those more relevant to a globalised world, such as English and
Chinese. 
This means other minority languages, perhaps spoken by only a relatively
small number of people, may be dying out. 

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Model Answer
Languages are dying out all the time. The result of this is a world with
fewer languages. This is a good thing for people everywhere.