Name Gabriela Aguayo Date November 17, 2014 Cohort Element Superhero Project



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Name____Gabriela Aguayo_____Date_November 17, 2014_Cohort_________________

Element Superhero Project


                                                            INTRODUCTION                                                           




Hook

Briefly introduce the topic of your essay by discussing the issue. May include a thought provoking question or interesting fact.

The world is in danger! An evil villain has sent giant mutant

condor to take over Los Angeles. As the president of Elements Inc., the headquarters of elemental superheroes, it is up to us to send our best superheroes to save the world. But we have to hurry! The condors have already attacked and destroyed most of the city. The fate of the world is in your hands, good luck!


Thesis (Brief description of the paper)

State your powers at least three.

Sentence Starter: “In this essay I inform you of the superhero element that will save Los Angeles and his/her power are that when someone tries to kill them they won’t die they come back to life. He is made with fire too and will help save the world. He is also electrical, those are some three super powers.”

                                    BODY PARAGRAPH #1: “The Hamburger” style




Introduction (Introduce your superhero)

State where your superhero was born. May use in the story about how the superhero got his powers or was discovered. What is the age of the superhero?

Sentence Starter: “To go back to the beginning our superhero was born in Germany on 1996. He was discovered in a laboratory, well he was made in there but no one really knows that much information about it. It’s 18 years old from when it was created and discovered.   ”

Who are the family members of your superhero and do they have superhero powers too?

Some of the superheros family members are Zinc, Cadmium, and Mercury. Zinc is the dad of the superhero, Mercury is the mother, and Cadmium is the brother of the super hero element. They do not have a lot of things in common, they look pretty different from each other.










                                    BODY PARAGRAPH #2: “The Hamburger” style




Alias (Who is your superhero during the day vs night?)

What is your superhero’s name and/ or undercover name?




Sentence Starter: “Even though Ununbium will save the world is he needs to blend into society.  On a day to day basis Ununbium  this superhero goes by the alias of Copernicium. That is another name that people call the super hero element.”

Job/ Livestyle

What your superhero does for living or his/her undercover job?

Sentence Starter: “He works at a laboratory to see what is going on in the world and creates electricity in the lab.

Where does the superhero live or secret hideout?


Sentence Starter: “He lives in Germany in a lab

 

                                    BODY PARAGRAPH #3: “The Hamburger” style




Reason supporting claim

State your reason for believing that your superhero will stop the condor invasion.

Sentence Starter: “Finally, Ununbium will save the world because of the powers are that when someone tries to kill him he won’t die he come back to life. He is made with fire too and will help save the world. He is also electrical, those are some three super powers.

Evidence

Provide a fact or quote from the text that supports your reason.

Sentence Starter: “According to the scientist he is a superhero and helps people.

Explanation of Evidence (Warrant)

Explain how your evidence supports your claim by discussing what the quote means and why it’s important.

Sentence Starter: “This quote shows that he is a good superhero.

Counterclaim

Briefly discuss or quote the counterclaim to this reason.

Sentence Starter: “In contrast, other scientists claim that this superhero is not strong enough to stop the condor invasion because there is too many that keep coming back to the city and attacking.”

Rebuttal to Counterclaim

Prove the counterclaim wrong or invalid.

Sentence Starter: “This claim is incorrect because he is unstoppable and whenever they try to kill him he doesn’t die, he comes back alive.”

                                                      CONCLUDING STATEMENT




Restate claim and reasons

Sentence Starter: In conclusion, this superhero has great powers to stop the condor invasion because he hold very good, strong powers.

Call for further action

Provide a suggestion to help avoid this issue in the future.

Sentence Starter: In order to avoid condor invasion in the future he will need to make a force to stop them from coming back.

Julio Orellana

Ms. Ryan


Physical Science

10/28/14


Superhero
Most readers have never heard or used the word “vanadium.” But what is vanadium, how is it used everyday, and why is vanadium important? These are just some of the questions that we will be tackling today, and much more. Not to mention that this essay will also inform you of the superhero element that will save Los Angeles and his super-powers.

To go back to the beginning our superhero, he was born in Sweden, of 1801. His name is Vanadis, and he has one sibling. His parents are Niobium and Tantalum, but Vanadis likes to call them “mom and dad.” His sister is Dubnium, but he likes to call her “Dumb-ium.” Vanadis doesn’t like telling his friends his age, because he is the oldest out of them all (213 years-old). Vanadis also has powers, secretly. The only people who know about this is his family. Vanadis has the power to shoot electricity from his hands and arms, but he is not the only one that has powers in his family. Vanadis’s sister, Dubnium, also has powers. On the other hand, they are not electricity powers, she is radioactive. Anything or anyone she has contact with gets damaged, and can die! Dubnium usually wears gloves, long jeans, sweaters, and hats to protect mankind. Luckily, Dubnium was cured when young, so she is under medication to stop the radioactive energy getting worse. Vanadis had to feed, help, and protect his sister, a lot as a child.

Even though Vanadis will save the world, because he has these characteristic (electricity). He also needs to blend into society. On a day to day basis, Vanadis goes by the name of Steve, but he rather prefers his real name. Vanadis (Steve) works at a comic book store, ironically, he is a superhero himself. He thinks it's pretty funny reading comics about himself or his friends. Vanadis lives in Los Angeles, in a apartment. He likes to live a simple life, kind of. One day, Vanadis was in his apartment, watching television. But out of the blue, he heard yelling, screaming, and destruction outside. He quickly looked out his window and saw a condor invasion.

Finally, Vanadis will save the world because of the powers he has, electricity and strength. If I haven't mentioned it yet, Vanadis also has another power, strength. Because vanadium is used for steel-type materials (like tools), Vanadis is very strong. According to a website (www.americanvanadium.com/steel.php), vanadium is a steel that has high-strength. This data shows that Steve has a high amount of strength. Vanadis will also make the citizens of L.A. drowsy. The reason Steve will do this is because, he will make the pedestrians tired and forget the “whole” invasion. You could say it sounds much like “Men In Black”.



In conclusion, this superhero has great powers to stop the condor invasion because he holds electronic and strength powers. In order to avoid condor invasion in the future, scientist should not test on bunnies no more.
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