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As computers are being used
more and more in education, there will soon be no role
for the teacher in the classroom. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Here is my introduction:
It is true that computers have become an essential tool for teachers and
students in all
areas of education. However, while computers are extremely useful, I do not agree
with the idea that they could soon replace teachers completely.
1.
In the first sentence I introduce the topic of computers in education.
2.
In the second sentence I answer the question and make my opinion clear.
Don't wait until the conclusion to give your opinion.
Remember,
do a simple introduction, then you can focus on the main paragraphs.
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IELTS Writing Task 2: main body paragraphs
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After you introduction (see last week's lesson) you need to write 2 or 3
main body
paragraphs. This is the most important part of your essay.
If you have been following this blog for a while, or if you have bought my ebook, you
may have seen today's paragraph before. However, I'm reusing it for 2 reasons:
1.
It's a great example of how to write an "advantages" paragraph using a "firstly,
secondly, finally" structure.
2.
There are some excellent comments from students below this lesson. If you
read
them carefully, you will learn a lot.
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