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This employing older people essay would achieve a high band score.
It fully answers 
the task
 by discussing issues around the young and old
working and making some comparisons. A clear opinion is also given - the
writer believes a mix of young and old is best.
The essay is well-organized and 
coherent
. Each paragraph has a clear topic
and linking words between and within paragraphs are used appropriately.
There are examples of less common lexical (vocabulary items) and the
writer clearly knows how to 
collocate
.
There are a mix of simple, compound and 
complex sentences
.

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Vegetarianism Essay
This is a model vegetarianism essay.
As I always stress, you should read the question very carefully before you
answer it to make sure you are writing about the right thing.
Take a look at the question:
Every one of us should become a vegetarian
because eating meat can cause serious health
problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Staying on topic

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If you rush to start writing and don't analyse the question and brainstorm
some ideas you may include the wrong information.
There are religious or moral arguments for not eating meat, but if you
discuss those you will be going off topic.
This question is specifically about the health problems connected to eating
meat.
So you must discuss in your answer what some of these problems are and if
you think there are real health risks or not.
Knowing about the topic
And don't get worried that you do not know much about diet and health.
As part of your IELTS study it will help if you know the basics of most
topics such as some health vocabulary in this case, but you are not expected
to be an expert on nutrition.
Remember, you are being judged on your English ability and your ability to