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Some people think young people should be free to choose his or her job, but
other people think should be realistic and think more about their future.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people hold the belief that youngsters should be given a right to choose their
future career, while the opponents of this idea consider the job prospect in the
future more important. I think that not only choosing a job depends on their
favourite/ preference but also they should take working conditions into
consideration.
On the one hand, it is beneficial for choosing/ pursuing a job based on their joy
and passion. Firstly, they have the chance to put the knowledge into practice in
their job and they feel more comfortable and inspirable from job satisfaction. This
helps them to boost their job performance in their workplace. Moreover, those
working with job satisfaction are more likely to achieve goals they set in their
career path. As youngsters have a wide range for their future career.
On the other hand, young people should be realistic and think about their future. If
young people/ young adults can choose their ideal job, they would have a sense of
fulfillment. However, some professions are poorly paid which do not allow them
to meet basic daily needs. Take artists as a typical example, although they have
many amazing works of art they will go to Centrelink for allowances to sustain
their lives. Furthermore, young people should think about having a steady job
because they would benefit from better job prospects, which include promotional
opportunities and pay rise if they stayed in a job long-term and even have a chance
to moving up the ladder and earning a more lucrative living. Besides, there are
various perks such as sick leave, holiday entitlement, and a generous package or
yearly bonuses should also be given consideration.
In conclusion, although young people have a sense of happiness and fulfillment of
choosing a job freely, they should more concern about their future career which
allows them to maintain their lives.
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