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believe that believe that life will have greatly improved by then
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believe that believe that life will have greatly improved by then.
This is then supported throughout the essay, with three ideas set out in separate body paragraphs. These ideas and the way they will make life better are clearly identified in the first sentences of each paragraph: Technological advancements Socially conscious society Need to cooperate Having topic sentences that introduce each new idea are important for coherency and cohesion. These ideas are then followed by further explanation and clarification. Note that there is no repetition. You need to make sure all the information you present is new and you do not just repeat yourself. The essay is then clearly ended with a conclusion that summarises the writer’s view and has some final thoughts about the topic. There is also a good mix of vocabulary and sentence types, all used accurately. Overall then it is an excellent essay that would achieve a high score. Document Outline
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