Ielts model Essays Kindle

carers; nurture; instructional activities; socialize.
Importantly, words are correctly 
collocated
. There is no point putting in
high-level vocabulary if you do not know which words they collocate with
or which word forms to use. 
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
The grammar is accurate with few if any mistakes and there are a range of
sentence types and a mix of 
complex structures
. For example:
Although it is common...
I would argue that...
...due to the fact that they...
Not only this, since there are...
...other children, which they might...
This is because the environment...

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Donating Money to Charity Essay
In this donating money to charity essay for IELTS you have two sides of an
argument to discuss.
You can identify the two different arguments from the words "Some people
prefer..." and "Others however prefer...".
So you need to make sure you discuss both of these views, and of course say
what you personally think: "...and give your own opinion."
This is the question:
Some people prefer to provide help and support directly to those in
need. Others however prefer to give money to national and
international charitable organisations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In this donating money to charity essay, the writer presents the first argument
in the first body paragraph, the next argument in the second, then their
personal opinion in the conclusion. 

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This is a logical and simple way to do it but of course if can be approached
in slightly different ways (check out some of the other "discuss two opinion"
model essays to see other ways).
Now take a look at the model answer.