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Comments
This working from home essay would get a high score as it meets the
requirements of the task, which is to discuss the pros and cons of working
from home and state which there are more of.
It is also coherent and cohesive, with paragraphing used to good effect and
good linking within and between sentences. 
There is a good range of lexis (vocabulary) in the essay and it is used
accurately with good collocations. 
There is also a good mix of complex sentences and structures and again the
grammatical accuracy is very good.

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Locally Grown Produce Essay
This essay is about locally grown produce and whether people should be
encouraged to purchase only from local farms in order to improve the
environment and economies. 
Take a look at the question:
Today much of the food people eat gets transported from farms that
are thousands of miles away. Some people believe it would be better
for the environment and the economy if people only consumed food
produced by local farmers.
Would the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Analysing the Question
You have to be careful with this question and make sure that you cover all
the points that are presented in the prompt. 

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it specifically mentions the environment and the economy so you must
make sure you talk about these. If you don't the examiner may decide you
have not covered all the parts of the question. 
Also the prompt is suggesting there are both advantages and
disadvantages, so again it is a good ideas to mention both to ensure you
have fully answered the question.
If you think though there are more disadvantages for example, you can
present more support for this side as you believe they outweigh (i.e. there
are more of them) the advantages.
Now take a look at the model answer below.