to observe other connections which may surface. If new
connections come to light, they, too, must be formalized
and systematically scrutinized in light of the text. Such
a methodology allows one to read creatively and
deictically as one hunts for known patterns and suspects
that new ones may appear.
Concerning repetitional items, several levels were
employed by the wise men. Van Parunak, recently
developing the concept of cohesion in terms of
transitional techniques, writes that the similarity which
binds a section together may be a result of phonological,
morphological, lexical, syntactical, logical or rhetorical
similarities.1
First, phonologically, proverbs may be linked via
a common alphabetic letter (Prov 11:9-12b; 20:7-9,
24-26).2 While the common letter is most easily
recognized when it is initial, it may also be found in an
anadiplotic sense at the end of one line and the beginning
of the next (cf. Prov 10:17-18). The repetition may link
bi-colon to bi-colon (Prov 10:25-26) or it may join a
single stich to its pair (Prov 11:10a, 10b). Sometimes
the repetition may be within the stich (Prov 11:15a, where
the high frequency of ר's bonds the stich together as a
phonetic unit). Sometimes it may be the similar phonetic
sound, rather than an equivalent alphabetic symbol, which
is the repeated and cohesive feature (cf. 10:18 and the
repetition of sibilants ס, שׂ, שׁ). Methodologically, it
may be asked how one knows when the repetition of a letter
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1H. Van Dyke Parunak, "Transitional Techniques in
the Bible," JBL 102 (1983):528. Cf. M. A. K. Halliday and
Ruqaiya Hasan, Cohesion in English (London: Longman,
1976).
2Crenshaw, "Prolegomena," p. 14. Crenshaw has a
very helpful list of seven structuring principles which he
has observed. He writes, "Various means of linking several
proverbs occur: a common letter (Pr. 11:9-12b; 20:7-9;
24-26); the same introductory word (Pr. 15:13-14, 16-17);
the same idea (Pr. 16); the use of an acrostic (Pr.
31:10-31); paradoxical unity (Pr. 26:4-5); and numbers (Pr.
30:24-28). Thematic units characterize later proverbs (Pr.
1-9) and Sirach . . . ." Our study will merely develop the
potential of this statement in terms of Proverbs 10-15.
is significant or insignificant (note in the preceding
eight words the ten-fold repetition of the letter "i"; yet
one should not be tempted to treat this text as reflecting
a tacit tendency toward alliteration). Bostrom, in his
superb attempt to expose the cohesiveness of Proverbs
10-15, notes many letter repetitions which provide the
individual proverbs and the proverb clusters with their
cohesion.1 Margalit, as cited above, provides some
parameters which, although these may still seem somewhat
speculative, will at least provide some minimum
requirements.2 Features of alliteration (consonance and
assonance) and rhyme should be examined since they may
serve to bind together single proverbs as well as
proverbial clusters. While the phonetic repetition itself
is objective, whether it is significant or not will be a
subjective evaluation which may be stated only in terms of
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1Bostrom, Paronomasi I Den Aldre Hebreiska
Mashcallitteraturen, pp. 118ff. Bostrom's work has
manifested great insight but in some cases he may have
overstated his point.
2Margalit, "Introduction to Ugaritic Prosody," pp.
310-13. "To be significant, a letter should occur: (a) at
least three times per seven verse-unit verse; and/or (b)
twice in a single word or once in each of two adjacent
words (especially at the beginning); and/or (c) as repeated
sequence of two or more adjacent letters, not necessarily
in the same order, and not necessarily in the scope of a
single word" (p. 311). This writer will use this as a
minimum guideline and feels that the positioning of letters
should be more accounted for (initial, medial, and final).
varying degrees of probability.1
The second repetitional feature is the repetition
of lexical units. While Brown has correctly noticed that
such repetitions may provide cues for determining larger
structures, they may also be a means of binding a stich,
bi-colon, proverbial pair or string together. As noted
above, classical rhetoric has provided some terminology
for describing such repetitions: (1) anaphora (units with
the same start; e.g., Prov 10:2, 3; 11:5, 6); (2) epiphora
(units with the same final words; e.g., 11:10a, 11a);
(3) ploke (the first starts the same as the second ends);
and (4) anadiplosis (the first ends the same as the second
begins).2 It has been observed that in both Egypt and
Mesopotamia the sages frequently used a catch-word
principle by which they bound proverbial pairs and strings
together (e.g., Prov 26:20, 21). Numerous writers have
noted this phenomenon in Proverbs (Murphy being the most
thorough and easily accessed).3 This feature is
particularly striking when the word is in the same
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1E. D. Hirsch, Validity in Interpretation (New
Haven: Yale University Press, 1967), pp. 13-22. Hirsch
has a nice discussion on conscious and unconscious
authorial intent and the relationship of these to verbal
meaning.
2O'Connor, Hebrew Verse Structure, p. 144.
3Murphy, Wisdom Literature: Job, Proverbs,
Ruth,
Canticles, Ecclesiastes, Esther, pp. 68-73. Murphy's
analysis of cohesive features is the most complete in the
English language.
syntactic position or when it is a low frequency word
(e.g., Prov 10:14, 15 [מְחִתָּה (ruin)]; 10:32; 11:1 [רָצוֹן
(delight)]). If the analysis were to be complete, one
should monitor not only the fact that the repetition
exists, but also how it functions. Numerous variations
may be seen in the way the scribe creatively used
repetition to bind. Quite frequently he repeated an
item--thereby binding the proverb together--yet linked it
to its opposite (e.g., Prov 10:5 בֵּן מַשְׂכִיל (wise son); בֵּן
מֵבִישׁ (shameful son); 10:11 פִי צַדּיק [mouth of the
righteous]; פִי רְשָׁעִים [mouth of the wicked]).
Another feature to be included in the catch-word
or word repetition category is the repetition of larger
units (phrases, clauses, stichs and even whole proverbs).
Often the repetitions are with variation (e.g., 10:2a;
11:4a) or they may be exact repetitions (10:6b, 11b; and
10:8b, 10b).
One should not ignore variational techniques which
accompany the repetition. Often the repeated lexical root
will be found in a different syntactical position (note
בְּרָכָה [blessing] in Prov 10:6, 7). Variation may be
accomplished by morphological shifts in person, gender or
number (e.g., יְכַסֶּה / תְּכַסֶּה [conceal], Prov 10:11, 12).
The use of word pairs should be mentioned at this
point, as they provide a close parallel to exact
repetition. The sage often used word pairs to bind his
proverb together (e.g., שִׂנְאָה [hatred]/ אַהֲבָה [love], Prov
10:12). Frequently the paired word is in construct with a
word which turns the pair into an antithesis (e.g., כַף־
רְמִיָּה [lazy palm]/ יַד חָרוּצִים [diligent hand], Prov 10:4).
A third area of repetition is on a syntactic
level--whether in terms of deep or surface structure.
Proverbs 10:1b has been shown to echo syntactically 10:1a
via a nominalizing transformation which accounts for the
surface structure differences. Proverbs 10:5 can be shown
to be a perfect isomorphic syntactical match. So, too,
one may detect syntactic parallels between proverbs (e.g.,
Prov 10:31a, 32a; and 10:6, 7 with some variation).
Variations may include changes in person, gender, number
(Prov 10:2, 3, רֶשַׁע [wicked, singular] and רְשָׁעִים [wicked,
plural]). Most frequently in narrative there is the
continuity of pronominal markers which indicate unity (cf.
Prov 10:22).
A final area of repetition is topical--where one
proverb is thematically cohesive with its neighbor. While
it has been noted above that many writers recognize the
topical chaos of Proverbs 10-15, there are points of
topical coherence. Proverbs 10:2 and 3, for example, both
talk about wealth. Proverbs 10:18-21 comment on the
proper/improper use of speech.
Generally three types of proverbial clustering
have been observed. Though the proverbs are often atomic
and singular kernels, they are frequently found in paired
relationships. Proverbs 26:4, 5 is notorious because it
presents a paradoxical pair. Proverbs 10:2, 3 and 10:15,
16 (cf. also Prov 11:5, 6) are clear examples of
proverbial pairs about wealth. The second type shall be
designated as a proverbial string, which is a group of
three or more proverbs linked by any of the above
cohesional devices. A string may cohere on the basis of
topic (Prov 10:18-21) or by one of the above repetitional
features (Prov 11:9-11). Finally, several broken or
detached string elements have been noticed which may
provide a "hinging" effect between the string and its
context (Prov 11:9-11, 14; and Prov 10:23, 25-26).1
Thus, repetitional features may take the form of
sounds/letters, lexical units, phrases, clauses, or whole
proverbs. Particularly frequent are catch-words. In
addition to topical similarities, syntactical repetitions
and cohesions may also bind the text. To each of these
elements of equivalence (semantic, syntactic, phonetic)
there may be variations either from within the category
itself (repetition of a sibilant by the use of various
letters ס, שׂ, שׁ) or from another category (repetition of a
lexical root which is fitted to another syntactical or
morphological class).
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1Van Parunak, "Transitional Techniques in the
Bible," pp. 540-46.
Sequential features may also provide unity for a
passage. The acrostic is a classic example of this on a
phonological level. The numerical proverbs are
sequentially bound by a numerical phenomenon (Prov
30:18-19). There may be a logical progression as a case
is argued or an event narrated, although such will not
occur explicitly in the corpus.
Hence, many elements of sequence and equivalence
will be monitored to determine if indeed this proverbial
collection was crafted according to principles or whether
it is merely a haphazard agglomeration of atomic proverbs
with no molecular inter-proverbial bonds. Still remaining
is to examine the text of Proverbs 10 itself, which will
provide the specimen for this experiment.
Cohesional Features in Proverbs 10
In order to facilitate a lucid discussion, there
will be a verse-by-verse monitoring of both intra- and
inter-proverbial cohesions. Concluding the discussion
will be the structural diagrams synthesizing these
cohesive factors. Because of the clarity of the diagrams,
it may be of benefit to refer to the diagrams as the
verses are discussed. One may wish to consult Bostrom
concerning letter/sound repetitions1 and Murphy for catch-
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1Bostrom, Paronomasi I den Aldre Hebreiska
Mashcalliteraturen, pp. 118ff.
words and logical links.1 Since the tagmemic analysis has
carefully exposed the intra-proverbial syntax, these
features will not be mentioned at this point.
Proverbs 10:1 בֵּן חָכָם יְשַׂמַּח־אַב
A wise son brings joy to his father,
וּבֵן כְּסִיל תּוּגַת אִמּוֹ
but a foolish son grief to his mother.
Proverbs 10:1 is bound together syntactically and
via the familial terms (the repeated use of בֵּן [son]) and
the pairing of אַב (father) and אִמּוֹ (his mother). Each
stich seems to manifest an inclusio effect, by being
framed with familial terms (בֵּן, אַָב; and בֵּן, אִמּוֹ) thereby
foregrounding--by juxtaposition--the close nexus between
חָכָם and יְשַׂמַּח, and כְּסִיל; and תּוּגַת. It is possible that this
inclusio effect is further ameliorated by the repeated
consonants in 10:1a-- ב, ח, מ, מ, ח, ב. While this may
not be significant it does fit Margalit's standards
for alliteration. The repetitions of the letters
and the chiastic ordering have been previously noted by
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1Murphy, Wisdom Literature: Job, Proverbs, Ruth,
Canticles, Ecclesiastes, Esther, pp. 68-73. The following
analysis reflects insights gained from the present writer's
extended exposure to linguistics, not from the work of
Bostrom (a copy of which was obtained only after the
analysis had been completed), or Murphy (whose work was
published after the following analysis was completed).
This writer does view their works as somewhat mutually
exclusive since Bostrom focuses on sound patterns and
Murphy on semantics. They are confirmatory to the general
thesis proposed here, i.e., that there is evidence of
collectional construction.
Bostrom.1 The repetition of the word בֵּן (son) in the
second stich results in the second stich's beginning with
a as well. While such sound/letter patterns may be of
no significance, they should be monitored since sometimes
they are clearly intentional. Intentionality most likely
was not involved in 10:1, however.
Proverbs 10:2 לֹא־יוֹעִילוּ אוֹצְרוֹת רֶשַׁע
Ill-gotten treasures are of no value,
וּצְדָקָה תַּצִיל מִמַּוֶת
but righteousness delivers from death.
Bostrom suggests that Proverbs 10:2 (cf. 11:4)
exhibits assonance.2 Note the four-fold repetition of the
וֹ ("o" sound) in the first stich. Also between the first
and second stichs is the יל sequence with a in the
immediate vicinity. The thrice-repeated fits the
alliteration standards, although it seems rather weak.
The semantical play on אוֹצְרוֹת (riches) being of no
יוֹעִילוּ (value) focuses on the two terms רֶשַׁע / צְדָקָה which
are drawn together both positionally and semantically for
contrast. Deliverance from death provides the benefits
that wealth, whether good or evil, could never attain.
Thus, the pragmatic value of צְדָקָה is unique. Again one
sees how well-crafted the sayings are.
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1Bostrom, Paronomasi I den Aldre Hebreiska
Mashcalliteraturen, p. 120.
2Ibid., p. 120.
Proverbs 10:3 לֹא־יַרְעִיב יְהוָה נֶפֶש צַדִיק
The LORD does not let the righteous go hungry
וְהַוַת רְשָׁעִים יֶהְדֹף
But he thwarts the craving of the wicked.
Proverbs 10:3 obviously forms a pair with 10:2.
The introductory לֹאo followed by a Hiphil imperfect
unquestionably syntactically binds the two verses
together. The similarity does not stop there, however.
There is also a common thematic element, in that both
address the issue of the relationship of the
wicked/righteous to material possessions. This pair
provides an example of complex chiasm, as the initial
negations plus the imperfect verb would render the verbal
structure AB/AB, contrasting the wealth of the wicked,
whose wealth is valueless, with the righteous/
righteousness who receive material blessings from Yahweh
(לֹא־יוֹעִילוּ, תַּצִיל // לֹא־יַרְעִיב, יֶהְדֹף). In the person being
discussed, however, an AB/BA pattern (רֶשַׁע, צדָקָה;// צַדִּיקa,
רְשָׁעִים). Thus the repetition of righteous/righteousness
and wicked semantically binds these two sayings. They are
both concerned with a similar topic and similar character
qualities. Notice that the semantic elements of
equivalence (righteous/wicked) are varied morphologically
(רֶשַׁע, רְשָׁעִים, and צדָקָה;, צַדִּיקa). Bostrom notices the
repetition of the letter and particularly the sequence
יה in the divine name יְהוָה and in the verb of the second
stich, which YHWH does (יֶהְדֹף). Another linking feature is
the presence of the divine name in the first stich and the
pronominal reference back to it in the second. This
morphologically binds the proverbial bi-colon together
through one actor (יְהוָה), whose actions vary based on the
character of the individuals involved. A chiastic effect
is also contained in Proverbs 10:3 via the juxtaposing of
the characters (נֶפֶש צַדִיק / הַוַת רְשָׁעִים) with the imperfect
verbs framing the proverb (לֹא־יַרְעִיב, יֶהְדֹף). So there is
an AB/BA structure in the sequence: imperfect verb
describing God's actions/person involved//person
involved/imperfect verb describing God's actions. One
also wonders whether there is a play between נֶפֶש ("soul"
or "passion") and הַוַת (desire). Therefore, the inner
coherence, as well as, in this case, the bond with the
neighboring proverb, demonstrates the intricate
craftsmanship manifested in this saying and its pair
(10:2).
Proverbs 10:4 רָאשׁ עֹשֶׁה כַף־רְמִיָּה
Lazy hands make a man poor,
וְיַד חָרוּצִים תַעֲשִׁיר
but diligent hands bring wealth.
This verse continues the theme of material
possessions and suggests how wealth is properly accrued.
Bostrom well notes the alliteration with the "r" sounds,
as ר is repeated four times in the proverb.1 The proverb
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1Ibid., p. 121.
begins and ends with r. It may be significant that both
verbs have an Wf sequence (עֹשֶׁה / תַּעֲשִׁיר). There is a
conspicuous chiastic structure with the inner elements
contrasting the character and the outer elements the
resultant economic status (poor/lax hand//diligent
hand/gets wealth). The middle terms are bound in that
and יַד are a standard word pair and are used here in a
synonymous manner. The contrast comes in the constructed
elements (רְמִיָּה / חָרוּצִים, cf. 10:1). Thus, the proverb itself
is a tightly-knit unit. Perhaps Bostrom is right when he
suggests that there is a word play in the sound-echoing
effect of חָרוּצִים with the word for gold (חָרוּץ).1
Proverbs 10:5 אֹגֶר בּקָיִץ בֵּן מַשְׂכִּיל
He who gathers crops in summer is a wise son,
נִרְדָּם בַּקָצִיל בֵּן מֵבִישׁ
but he who sleeps during harvest is a disgraceful son.
Proverbs 10:5 continues the theme of the acquiring
of wealth through diligence, thus indicating that 10:4 and
5 are also a proverbial pair. Again, as in 10:2, 3, there
is a bi-proverbial chiasm AB/BA (lax hands/diligent
hands//working wise son/otiose shameful son).
Syntactically, 10:5 is a total isomorphism and manifests a
strong syntactic cohesion within the proverb itself. The
word play between קַיִץ (summer) and קָצִיר (harvest) is an
obvious sonant-semantic play which further binds the
stichs together (cf. Prov 26:1; Amos 8:1-2). The
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1Ibid.
five-fold repetition of is significant, especially when
it occurs four times in the word initial position. The
word repetitions of the preposition בְּ (in) and בֵּן (son)
engender the feeling of sameness. Bostrom makes a
contribution at this point by noticing that the order of
the sounds ר, בק, בן, and מ-שׁ in both stichs demonstrates
the genius of the sage who provides such a sonantally,
semantically, and syntactically perfect match.1 The Qal
active participle עֹשֶׂה (make) in 10:4a may assonantally tie
to the Qal active participle אֹגֵר (gathers) which begins
10:5a.
One may at this juncture reflectively suggest that
Proverbs 10:2-5 forms a quatrain centering on the theme of
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