SAMPLE 35
Nowadays more and more young people hold the important positions in the
government. Some people think that is a good thing while others argue that it
is not suitable.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In recent years, there is an increasing number of the young who occupy key
positions in the government. While there are some conflicting ideas about this
issue, I myself support that this trend brings many more benefits to the society.
On the one hand, the engagement/involvement of young people in the governmental
system of a county causes several drawbacks/difficulties/problems to the society.
The problem is that young mayors have difficulties in terms of becoming a leader
of old-timers, especially in some eastern countries like Vietnam and China. They
invariably are said not possessing the strong managerial capacity, resulting in the
non-compliance of their senior staff members. Besides, due to their young ages
and not having sufficient empirical experiences, they are likely to make deadly
mistakes especially when facing monumental challenges in their career, which
possibly lead to a number of catastrophic social consequences
On the other hand, I am inclined to believe that the young gradually become a
crucial part in the government and make remarkable contributions to a community.
Firstly, they definitely devote most of their youth to works as to be creative and
constantly changing. Thus, this possibly leads to the emergence of a series of
breakthrough policies and managerial mechanism. Moreover, young people have
a longer time to dedicate themselves to serving their nations. For example, in
some developed countries, with the same capacity and similar qualification, the
younger candidates have a higher winning ratio in comparison with the older one
due to his greater amount of time engaging in governmental affairs.
In conclusion, although the fact that the young hold key positions in the government
has some drawbacks, it seems to me that it is much more beneficial for a country
when young people participate in the governmental hierarchy.
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