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Nowadays young people spend too much of their free time in shopping malls.
Some people fear that this may have negative effects on young people and
the society they live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Spending an excessive amount of spare time in shopping centers is said/ believed
to bring negative impacts on the young/ youngsters and their society. While I
accept the justification for this view to certain extents, there are reasons for me to
feel convinced towards an opposite view.
On the one hand, there are a variety of reasons why spending time excessively in
shopping malls is detrimental. Firstly, when young people waste excessive time
for shopping, they will do not have enough time to take part in other meaningful
activities such as reading books, playing sports or doing/ taking up exercises.
Therefore, they may fall behind their study as well as their peers. Secondly, they
are likely to misspend a great deal of money on unnecessary items, this may make
them face financial troubles. For example, buying products without planning may
cause the shortage of money to pay for daily fees/ expenses like water supply or
electronic bills.
On the other hand, go shopping regularly also brings some benefits to people and
society. When people find a relaxation method after working or studying hour,
shopping is an effective way to release stress after a day of working or studying
excessively. Furthermore, the rise of product consumption helps to promote
manufacture as well as create more jobs. This is a remarkable contribution to the
growth of national economy.
In conclusion, it seems evident that spending time in shopping malls has both
negative and positive impacts on people.
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