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Some people prefer to live in small family units, while others think it is better
to live in large family groups. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
There is a controversy over whether people should live in nuclear family or
individuals should live in an extended family. This essay discusses both views
mentioned above and then I will give my own opinion.
There are several advantages for some individuals to live in a large family group.
Firstly, parents can be a role model for their children to look up to through several
actions such as taking care of grandparents, which helps their offspring develop a
sense of responsibility and respects their family. As a result, living with the
elderly helps to create a strong family relationship/ bond. Second, since there are
many beloved family members, people can give a helping hand to do housework.
For instance, if parents have to finish all of the work obligations, grandparents
might help to care for/ look after their grandchildren.
There are a number of factors that some people prefer living in small family units.
Firstly, by having more quality/ valuable time to do what people really want to do
such as traveling for long distance trip or learning something special, these
individuals living in small families could be much freer. For example, children
living in an elementary family would be more independent, which plays an
important role in their adulthood. In addition, retired people should live far away
from their adult children, which reduces the financial burden on young
generations/ youngsters. In fact, if the young adults live together with their parents,
they will have to shoulder the responsibility to take care of the elderly and their
pressure will become heavier.
In conclusion, while living in the large family group can be positive to some
extent, I believe that living in a nuclear family can have more benefits.
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