Ielts model Essays Kindle

idea. 
Ideas are also extended and supported by the use of reasons and some 
examples or further clarification. No ideas are left unclear or unexplained.
There is also some good topic related vocabulary in the animal testing
essay such as 'life saving drugs' and 'bred' and a mix of complex sentences,
such as 
adverbial clauses
:
'Although it may improve the lives of humans, it is not fair that animals
should suffer in order to achieve this'.
Noun clauses
: 
'...they feel that many tests are not really important'.
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'...the animals which are used are not usually wild...'
Transitions
 are also used effectively to ensure there is good coherence and 
cohesion. For example, 'On the other hand..' indicates a change to discuss
the contrasting ideas, and 'Therefore..." and 'As a consequence..' are used to
give results. 

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Fear of Crime Essay
This fear of crime essay is based around the issue of crime prevention -
specifically, is it possible to prevent crime or not?
In some essays you are simply asked to give your opinion or views. This
leaves it fairly open in how to approach your answer.
However, as is always the case, you must spend some time analysing the
question to make sure you are very clear about what you are being presented
with.
Take a look at the question below.
Many people are too scared to leave their home because of a fear of
crime.
Some people think that more should be done to prevent crime, whereas
others feel that nothing can be done.
What are your views?

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In this fear of crime essay you are given two sides:
More should be done to prevent crime
Nothing can be done
You could argue one side throughout your essay, but the best approach is to
look at both sides of the issue to make sure you are fully answering the
question. It is also easier to come up with more ideas if you look at both
sides.
You should also decide which side you are going to agree with and make
this very clear in your answer.
In this particular essay, the author's view is that more should be done to
prevent crime.
This is presented in the second body paragraph (though another option
would be to discuss both sides and present your own opinion only in the
introduction and / or conclusion).
Take a look at the model answer below.