Some people think that the main factors influencing a child’s
development these days are things such as television, friends, and
music. Others believe that the family still remains more important.
Discuss both opinions and give your opinion.
While parents obviously play a major role in the way that their child
develops as they get older, many people believe that social factors outside
of the family now influence children much more. This
essay will examine
both sides of the argument.
There is no doubt that there are factors external to the family that
significantly impact on a child’s development. For example, there is
television and the internet. Children these days
have access to these much
more than they used to in the past, and they will pick up language and see
things that will teach them about life. Friends also have an important
influence as a child will often copy peers that they admire and respect. This
could be positive behaviour
but it could also be negative, such as smoking
or taking drugs.
Ultimately, however, it is family who have the most important impact.
Children spend nearly all of their time with their family, especially in their
early years.
They develop their confidence, socialisation skills, morals,
values and views on life through their interaction with them. Proof of the
importance of this can be seen in the differences between some children.
Those that grow up in a dysfunctional home often eventually have problems
themselves, whilst those that are brought
up in a warm and close
environment end up more confident and secure in adult life.
To conclude, it is the family that can provide a supportive, secure, and
nurturing environment, which is crucial
to the way in which a child
becomes an adult. Although it is clear that social factors play a part, I would
argue that it is the former that is the most important.
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