view on the issue (
I am unconvinced...and feel...).
The essay has a well-balanced argument looking at both sides of the issue.
The first body paragraph expresses some doubt about alternative
therapies (...
little scientific research.. .only useful for long term...), but in
the second body paragraph the writer takes a different view (
On the other
hand...) and examines the benefits (...
few side effects).
The writer's concluding paragraph offers a strong opinion (
I strongly
believe...) and sums up the fact that both types of treatment are valid today.
There is also a good range of grammatical structures (
If they were totally
unhelpful, it would be...), and connectors (
despite the fact, in addition,
finally).
Arts Spending Essay
This sample IELTS writing is on
the arts.
A common topic in IELTS is whether you
think it is a good idea for
government money to be spent on
the arts i.e. the visual arts (as you see in
art galleries), literary arts (books) and the performing arts (music, theatre,
dance and film), or whether it should be
spent elsewhere, usually on other
public
services such as education, health, policing etc.
Take a look at the question:
Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a
waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public
services instead.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
In
this question, you are given the opinion that spending money on the arts is
a waste of money, and it would be better spent on public services.
You then have to say if you agree or disagree. So you would need to decide
what you think and give reasons to support your decision.
The sample IELTS writing model answer
presented here is a balanced
argument that
partly agrees with this opinion.
This is made clear in the
thesis statement:
Although I agree that it is important to spend
money on public services, I do not think spending
on the arts is a waste of money.
So the writer does not think it is a 'waste of money'; however, he/she does
think the majority of money should go on public services.
The essay, therefore,
needs to explain this, and so is organized as follows:
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