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The essay meets the requirements of the task as it discusses both problems
and solutions and uses ideas and examples to support the various points.
The response also ensures that the problems are related to issues of
developing countries.
There are good examples of topic-related words and phrases: 
exodus of workers
top specialists
novices
standard of living 
personnel
void in the workplace
understaffed
served the country
contribute to their economy 
There is also a good mix of grammatical structures and a variety of types of
adverbial clause. For example: 
These professionals often have the skills and ideas to significantly boost
the economy, which is important to improve the standard of living of its


residents. (relative clause)
The loss of these workers is why developed countries keep
improving while the poorer countries remain stagnant. (noun clause
and adverbial clause)
Though such problems have been going on for quite some time, there
are plausible solutions. (adverbial clause)
…the results will be well worth it if the talented and experienced
workers can stay. (adverbial clause) The second solution is to prevent
workers from leaving until they have served the country for a few
years. (adverbial clause)


Sedentary Lifestyle Essay
This sedentary lifestyle essays is about the problems that can arise if people
are not having active lifestyles and what could be done to change this
situation. 
Understanding the Question
The vocabulary in essays questions is usually easy to understand but
occasionally a word could arise that you have not heard before.
Do you understand what sedentary means? If not, you should be able to
work it out from the question: 

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