Proverbial poetry: its settings and syntax



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1Collins, Line-Forms In Hebrew Poetry, p. 199.

One must be extremely careful to avoid using such datum as

a sole criterion for authorship determination since content

and genre may also play important roles in the shaping of

syntactic features of the poetic line.

2Collins' analysis of over 1900 lines of prophetic

poetry has provided a benchmark against which other genres

may now be measured in terms of similarities and

differences. It will be shown that Collins' assumption

that his prophetic corpus provided a representative sample

of poetry was incorrect. A more discerning approach was

taken by O'Connor who took samples from the various genres

and periods of Hebrew poetry, thereby providing a broader

and more satisfying "representative sample" of Hebrew
post-exilic), and content.1 Because of the work done by

Collins on the structure of the prophetic bi-colon and by

O'Connor on the line itself (from a more representative

sample--1200 lines), a comparison of the results obtained

from Proverbs and these corpora will provide interesting

similarities and contrasts.

Three sets of analysis will be performed in this

study. First, there will be a comparison, via charts and

discussions, of Collins' results in the prophets and the

structural patterns found in Proverbs 10-15. Although the

magnitude of Collins' prophetic corpus (1900 lines) dwarfs

the proverbial analysis, the convergence of the results in

Proverbs will be able to support a comparison, although

certainly no claims of conclusiveness will be made because

only 88 of the 184 verses analyzed allowed for a direct

collation with Collins' line types.2 A second comparison

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poetry (contra Barr's review of Hebrew Verse Structure JJS,

84 (Spring 1983), p. 118).

1Ibid., pp. 66, 150. Collins attempts to tie

syntactic line-type with a semantic set. This would

suggest another alternative to explain variations rather

than postulating that sectional variations are as

indicative of changes of authorship. He fails to develop

the influence of content as grounds for stylistic variation

in the different sections of Isaiah, for example.

2This should reflect on the lack of

comprehensiveness of Collins' approach, particularly in his

sparse treatment of nominal clauses. Of the 184 verses

treated in Proverbs, 80 were nominal in character (cf. 88

of his A, B, C, D type). Thus, if nominal clauses are

included 168 verses allow for assimilation with Collins'

work.
will be made with O'Connor's line constraint system, which

was able to handle all lines in the corpus. Finally, an

analysis of matching, isomorphisms, and homomorphisms as

well as specific examples of the creative use of syntax

and syntactical transformations by the sages will

demonstrate the value of the tagmemic approach taken

above. It is obvious that all of the interesting

syntactic features cannot be elaborated on within this

paper. Thus, one further goal of this study is to suggest

other directions which could be pursued from the data base

provided in the corpus.
A Comparison of Collins' Prophetic Corpus

with the Proverbial Corpus
The discussion of Collins' work will focus on

several charts which summarize his findings and which

provide a convenient point of analogy with the results

compiled from the proverbial corpus.1 These charts are

descriptive in nature--compiled in an attempt to discover

poetic patterns of equivalence and variation. Since they

provide mere distributions of line types, they should

not be understood in a prescriptive manner as determinative

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1Appendix 1 has the compilation of the Collins

line types found in Proverbs 10-15 along with the frequency and

locations of each type. This list could be used to

discover if there are syntactic-semantic sets in Proverbs

similiar to those found by Collins in the prophets.
of proverbial or prophetic syntactical features. Thus,

all conclusions are tentative and given in terms of

probabilities--thus reflecting the limited size and

varied character of the data bases themselves. This

should not minify the value of the results, for it is

important in any appreciation of literature to recognize

what patterns are "normal" and which are "supra-normal."

The following analysis will provide a scientifically-

specified basis for the determination of archetypical

patterns, thereby removing it from the realm of vague

intuition.1
A Line Type Comparison
Chart 10.1 provides an overview of the results of

Collins' line types (1943 lines) in his prophetic corpus

with what was found after examining 184 lines of

proverbial poetry.2 The chart is divided into three

sections. The top gives the broad results which Collins

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1Pedagogically this data may help those students

who have dull intuitional perceptions to be guided

deictically to significant features they should look for

and which are not as consequential. This type of analysis

then provides an analytic foundation for a better

intuitional reading of the text.



2Cf. Collins, Line-Forms in Hebrew Poetry, p. 195.

One should recall: Line I = contiguous line, Line II =

where the two cola match syntactically, Line III = gapped

matching, Line IV = two different syntactic configurations

in the two cola [A = SV; B = SVM; C = SVO; D = SVOM]. Thus

Collins' system specifies both single and bi-colonic syntax

into an easily accessible format.

CHART 10.1

Comparison with Collins' "General Statistical Survey" [Collins, p. 195]

Line - Type I II III IV Totals

A B C D A B C D A B C D

Collins Totals 7 193 47 253 89 151 124 121 20 201 85 165 487 1943

Collins % 0.4 9.9 2.4 13 4.6 7.8 6.4 6.2 1 10.3 4.4 8.5 25.1 100%
Collins Totals 500 485 471 487 1943

Collins % 25.7% 25% 24.2% 25.1% 100%

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Prov 10-15 Totals 0 1 0 1 5 4 23 0 0 7 8 1 38 88

% 0 1.1 0 1.1 5 4.6 26.2 0 0 8.1 9.2 1.1 43.2 100%

Prov Line-Types

without nom. 2 31 16 38 87

% 2.3% 35.6% 18.4% 43.7% 100%

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Prov 10-15 Totals

for nom. type 3 29 5 43 % 80

% 3.8% 36.2% 6.2% 53.8 100%

Line-Type totals

for Prov 10-15

including nom. 5 60 21 81 168

% 3% 35.9% 12.6% 48.5% 100%

found according to Line-Type [I,II,III,IV] and then

divided into Basic Sentence type [A,B,C,D]. He found a

very stable distribution over the Line-Types in that there

were 500 (25.7%) type I, 485 (25%) type II, 471 (24.2%)

type III, and 487 (25.1%) type IV. A significant

difference is observed when these results are juxtaposed

to Proverbs 10-15 (type I, 2 [2.3%]; type II, 31 [35.6%];

type III, 16 [18.4%]; and type IV, 38 [43.7%]). It is

interesting that when the nominal (nom.) Basic Sentence

type is added, doubling the size of the sample, the

results are similar (type I, 3 [3.8%]; type II, 29

[36.2%]; type III, 5 [6.2%]; and type IV, 43 [53.8%]).

The bottom line of the chart provides a sum of the total

of the nominal plus Collins' basic sentence types--

revealing that there is a substantial contrast between the

prophets and what was found in Proverbs (Line type I:

prophets [25.7%]//proverbs [3%]; Line type II: prophets

[25%]//proverbs [35.9%]; Line type III: prophets [24.2%]

//proverbs [12.6%]; and Line type IV: prophets [25.1%]//

proverbs [48.5%]).

Note that Proverbs' line type distribution is very

uneven, with line types II and IV dominating and line type

I being virtually ignored. Proverbs 10-15 seems to prefer

syntactic repetitions (matching), as demonstrated by the

frequent use of line type II. The fact that Proverbs

avoids line types I and III may show that it favors each

colon's being a separate, independent and complete unit,

rather than, as in the prophets, frequently employing

syntactic contiguity between the cola, as in line type I,

or in a relation of gapping between the lines, as in line

type III. The prevalence of line type IV would confirm

that the sages favored two separate, independent, and

complete syntactical units in their proverbial cola, as

opposed to the prophets, who allowed for more continuity

and syntagmatic relationships between the cola. What has

just been suggested by the data is that the difference

between the prophets and the proverbial-using sages can be

to some extent syntactically specified.
Basic Sentence Frequency Comparison
Another difference is seen in the basic sentences

employed [A = SV; B = SVM; C = SVO; D = SVOP; nom. =

SPsc]. Note that in all of Collins' line types, D is used

rather frequently (Line type I, 253 [13%]; Line type II,

121 [6.2%] and Line type III, 165 [8.5%]). This is not

true in Proverbs 10-15, where in Line type II it was not

found at all and in Line type III it was found only once

(1.1%). Thus, what is being suggested is that the basic

sentence type D (SVOM) was avoided by the proverbial sage

although the prophets utilized it frequently. It may be

that the lengthiness of D was not well-suited to

proverbial tastes. Line weight, however, will be able to

be determined better via O'Connor's line constraint

matrix. It is also significant that A is not heavily used

either in the prophets or in proverbs. Two types of basic

sentences seem to dominate in Proverbs--C (SVO; Line type

II, 23 [26.5%]; Line type III, 8 [9.2%] and as will be

shown later in Line type IV) and nominal (SPsc) types (80

examples--almost as many as A, B, C, and D combined).

Thus, the nominal clause is characteristic of Proverbs

10-15 with C dominant, but trailing somewhat behind. The

prophets, on the other hand, do not seem to be so

dominated by nominal clauses, as Collins gives but scant

treatment of these types.1


A Comparison of Syntactically

Matching Lines


The next three charts will allow for the scrutiny

of patterns of lines which syntactically match (Line Type

II).2 Comparisons will be for basic sentences of types A,

B, and C, with no matches of D found in the proverbial

corpus. In type II A (chart 10.2) four arrangements are

possible (1,1 = SV/SV; 2,1 = VS/SV; 1,2 = SV/VS and 2,2 =

VS/VS). Collins found SV/VS rare and repeated patterns

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1Collins, Line-Forms in Hebrew Poetry, pp.

215-18.


2Cf. O'Connor's discussion in Hebrew Verse

Structure, pp. 391-400. He states that "somewhat over a

third of the lines" of his corpus manifested this trope.

This is about 8% over Collins' findings (25%) and more in

line with Proverbs' 36%.

CHART 10.2

Line Type II A Collins and Proverbs

[Collins, pp. 94, 195]

1,1 (SV/SV) 2,1 (VS/SV)


Collins 22 Collins 20

% 24.7% % 22.5%


Prov 4 Prov 0

100%


1,2 (SV/VS) 2,2 (VS/VS)
Collins 3 Collins 44

% 3.4% % 49.4%


Prov 0 Prov 0

CHART 10.4

Occurrences of Type II C: i) [Collins, p. 210]

A Comparison of Collins and Proverbs results

C. = Collins, P. = Prov
1,1 2,1 3,1 4,1 5,1 6,1

SVO/SVO SOV/SVO VSO/SVO VOS/SVO OSV/SVO OVS/SVO

C. 9 - 33.3% 1 - 3.7% 5 - 18.5% 0 0 0

P. 14 - 60% 0 1 - 4.3% 2 - 8.7% 0 0

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1,2


SVO/SOV SOV/SOV VSO/SOV VOS/SOV OSV/SOV OVS/SOV

C. 2 - 7.4% 2 - 7.4% 2 - 7.4% 0 0 0

P. 0 0 0 0 0 0

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1,3

SVO/VSO SOV/VSO VSO/VSO VOS/VSO OSV/VSO OVS/VSO



C. 0 0 3 - 11.1% 0 0 0

P. 0 0 0 0 0 0

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1,4


SVO/VOS SOV/VOS VSO/VOS VOS/VOS OSV/VOS OVS/VOS

C. 0 0 0 0 0 0

P. 0 0 0 2 - 8.6% 0 0

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1,5

SVO/OSV SOV/OSV VSO/OSV VOS/OSV OSV/OSV OVS/OSV



C. 0 0 1 - 3.7% 0 1 - 3.7% 0

P. 0 0 0 0 0 0

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1,6


SVO/OVS SOV/OVS VSO/OVS VOS/OVS OSV/OVS OVS/OVS

C. 0 0 1 - 3.7% 0 0 0

P. 3 - 13% 0 0 0 0 1- 4.3%

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Total Collins 27 (note Collins has 83 II C ii) types whereas Proverbs has none)

CHART 10.3

Occurrences of Type II B: i) [Collins, p. 209]

A Comparison of Collins and Proverbs

C. = Collins, P. = Proverbs
1,1 2,1 3,1 4,1 5,1 6,1

SVM/SVM SMV/SVM VSM/SVM VMS/SVM MSV/SVM MVS/SVM

C. 10 - 12.3% 1 - 1.2% 7 - 8.6% 3 - 3.7% 1 - 1.2% 1- 1.2%

P. 1 - 25% 0 1 - 25% 0 0 0

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1,2


SVM/SMV SMV/SMV VSM/SMV VMS/SMV MSV/SMV MVS/SMV

C. 2 - 2.5% 7 - 9.8% 10 - 12.3% 8 - 9.9% 0 5- 6.2%

P. 0 0 0 0 0 0

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1,3

SVM/VSM SMV/VSM VSM/VSM VMS/VSM MSV/VSM MVS/VSM



C. 0 0 7 - 8.6% 1 - 1.2% 0 1- 1.2%

P. 0 0 0 0 0 0

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1,4


SVM/VMS SMV/VMS VSM/VMS VMS/VMS MSV/VMS MVS/VMS

C. 0 2 - 2.5% 1 - 1.2% 3 - 3.7% 0 0

P. 0 1 - 25% 0 0 0 0

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1,5

SVM/MSV SMV/MSV VSM/MSV VMS/MSV MSV/MSV MVS/MSV



C. 1 - 1.2% 0 1 - 1.2% 0 0 1- 1.2%

P. 0 0 0 0 0 1 - 25%

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1,6


SVM/MVS SMV/MVS VSM/MVS VMS/MVS MSV/MVS MVS/MVS

C. 0 1 - 1.2% 0 4 - 4.9% 0 3- 3.7%

P. 0 0 0 0 0 0

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Total Collins 81 (note Collins has 70 II B ii types, whereas Proverbs has none)

SV/SV (24.7%) and VS/VS (49.4%) predominate. Notice the

clear prophetic preference for V initial forms. In

proverbs, only four examples of II A were found--all of

which were of the 1,1 (SV/SV) type. Proverbs does not

favor the V initial, but fronts the S element, although

this will have to be substantiated later since four

examples do not provide a sufficient sample. Proverbs

does corroborate Collins' idea that poets favored the

repeated patterns, i.e. the SV elements in the same order

(SV/SV).

With II B types (SVM/SVM; chart 10.3), Collins

makes the following observations:
Lastly, from these line-forms three tendencies have

emerged which can be tentatively proposed as norms for

Hebrew line construction: a) initial V in the first

hemistich, b) initial NP1 in the second hemistich,

c) direct repetition of pattern. Where any two of

these tendencies coincide we get "strong" line-forms,

. . . Lines in which none of these tendencies appear

are unusual and have to be considered as stylistic

deviations.1
One may observe the repetitional pattern in the forms

which appear on the diagonal line of Collins' analysis

(top left to bottom right). He boxes off areas where

these three features do not occur; hence the boxed areas

are lower frequency and are considered stylistic variances

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1Collins, Line-Forms in Hebrew Poetry, p. 105. Cf.

also p. 212 for similar conclusions.

which may be significant.1 Proverbs 10-15 provides only

four examples of II B line types, two of which fall in

Collins' alleged low frequency, stylistically significant

boxes. Four of the eight hemistichs contain an S initial

while only one has a V initial sequence. This points

again to the prophets' V initial and proverbial S initial

syntactical difference. Other conclusions should not be

forced from only four examples.

Chart 10.4 examines II C (VS0/VS0) type lines.

Collins makes the following observations on this chart:

(1) verb initial position is favored; (2) repetition of

pattern (diagonal line) is frequent; (3) the S is often

initial in the second hemistich; and (4) if, after a verb,

two nouns are found in a row the first should be taken as

the subject and the second as the object.2 There is a

marked preference in Proverbs for the form SVO/SVO (60%)

as compared to the prophets (33.3%). The prophets use

more variety in their ordering of elements. It is

interesting that four (13%) out of the 23 examples were

found to violate Collins' principle that in V + N + N

sequences the first noun is the S and the second the O.

Thus column 4 (4,1 VOS/SVO and 4,4 VOS/VOS) provides

another contrast. The low frequency stylistic box finds

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1Ibid., p. 213.

2Ibid., pp. 112, 213.

three examples in Proverbs (1,6 SVO/OVS) while in the

prophets this order was not found. Clearly this form is

stylistic as it is a perfect chiasm. Both Proverbs and

the prophets favor a repetitional ordering, as may be seen

in SVO/SVO (1,1) and OVS/OVS (6,6) on the diagonal line.

The strength of the SV0/SV0 (60%) and the fact that 73% of

the lines have SVO as a member suggest that the SVO is

rather normative for Proverbs, while the prophets employed

a wider and more frequent variation of orderings. The

stricter ordering in Proverbs 10-15 may reflect genre

constraints which are not as stringent in the prophetic

literature. The prophets are much freer in the type of

genre and style they can employ in the communication of

their message. Hence more syntactic variational patterns

are acceptable. Thus what is being proffered is that

genre should be looked at from a syntactic base in tandem

with the semantic and structural approaches of Crenshaw

and others as discussed above. One final observation, as

in II B, the strong S initial position is found in

Proverbs while the prophets favor a V initial. One

wonders if the prophets are closer to narrative, which

clearly favors a V initial, while the sages are more

poetically free from narrative constraints so they prefer

an S first line as normative.

CHART 10.5

Collins' Summary of Statistics for Type IV [Collins p. 163]
i) ii) iii) iv) Totals
A/B 20 - 20 - 40

A/C 9 2 12 - 23

A/D - - 6 - 6
(29) (2) (38) (0) (69)

% 5.8% 0.4% 7.6% 0% 13.8%


B/A 28 3 4 10 45

B/C 24 36 25 2 87


B/D 5 26 16 1 48

(57) (65) (45) (13) (180)

% 11.4% 13.0% 9% 2.6% 36%
C/A 6 2 1 8 17

C/B 21 20 11 8 60

C/D 3 15 14 2 34

(30) (37) (26) (18) (111)

% 6% 7.4% 5.2% 3.6% 22.2%
D/A 1 2 3 7 13

D/B 1 31 5 19 56

D/C 3 56 3 10 72

(5) (89) (11) (36) (141)

% 1% 17.8% 2.2% 7.1% 28.1%
Totals 121 193 120 67 501

% 24.2% 38.5% 23.9% 13.4% 100%

Total Number of A's = 144 (14.4%); B's = 336 (33.5%);

C's = 293 (29.3%); D's = 229 (22.8%)

CHART 10.6

Summary of Statistics for Type IV in Proverbs

i) ii) iii) iv) Totals

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A/B 2 0 0 0 2

A/C 2 0 0 0 2

A/D 0 0 1 0 1

Total (4) (0) (1) (0) 5

% 10.6% 0% 2.6% 13.2%
A/nom. 1 0 0 0 1

Totals (5) 0 1 0 (6)

Total % 6.2% 0% 1.2% 0% 7.4%
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B/A 6 0 0 0 6

B/C 4 1 0 0 5

B/D 0 0 0 0 0

Total (10) (1) (0) (0) (11)

% 26.3% 2.6% 0% 0% 28.9%


B/nom. 7 0 0 1 8

Totals (17) (1) (0) (1) (19)

Total % 21% 1.2% 0% 1.2% 23.4%
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C/A 10 0 0 0 10

C/B 3 0 2 0 5

C/D 1 0 0 0 1

Total (14) (0) (2) (0) (16)

% 36.8% 0% 5.3% 0% 42.1%


C/nom. 13 0 2 0 15

Totals (27) (0) (4) (0) (31)

Total % 33.3% 0% 5% 0% 38.3%
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D/A 0 0 0 0 0

D/B 1 0 0 0 1

D/C 2 0 1 2 5

Total (3) (0) (1) (2) (6)

% 7.9% 0% 2.6% 5.3% 15.8%


D/nom. 0 1 0 0 1

Totals (3) (1) (1) (2) (7)

Total % 3.7% 1.2% 1.2% 2.5% 8.6%

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Totals 31 1 4 2 38

% 81.6% 2.6% 10.5% 5.3% 100%

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Totals


+ nom. 64 2 10 5 81

% 79% 2.5% 12.3% 6.2% 100%


CHART 10.6

Summary of Statistics for Type IV in Proverbs 10-15


nom./A 6 0 0 1 7

nom./B 1 0 1 0 2

nom./C 5 0 2 1 8

nom./D 0 0 1 0 1

Total (12) (0) (4) (2) (18)

% 14.8% 0% 4.9% 2.5% 22.2%


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Total number of A's = 21 (27.7%); B's = 19 (25%);

C's = 28 (36.8%); D's = 8 (10.5%)
Total + nom. number of A's = 29 (17.9%); B's = 29 (17.9%);

C's = 51 (31.5%); D's=10 (6.2%)

nom.'s = 43 (26.5%)

A Comparison of Syntactically Mixed Bi-Cola


The next charts provide data for an analysis

of line type IV which is a bi-colonic mix of basic

sentences (e.g. A/B, C/D etc.). Proverbs had 48.5% of its

bi-colon with this line type (prophets had 25.1%).

Collins' Summary shows that there is distribution of A/X =

13.8%; B/X = 36%; C/X = 22.2%; and D/X = 28.1%. Note that


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