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1Collins, Line-Forms In Hebrew Poetry, p. 199.
One must be extremely careful to avoid using such datum as
a sole criterion for authorship determination since content
and genre may also play important roles in the shaping of
syntactic features of the poetic line.
2Collins' analysis of over 1900 lines of prophetic
poetry has provided a benchmark against which other genres
may now be measured in terms of similarities and
differences. It will be shown that Collins' assumption
that his prophetic corpus provided a representative sample
of poetry was incorrect. A more discerning approach was
taken by O'Connor who took samples from the various genres
and periods of Hebrew poetry, thereby providing a broader
and more satisfying "representative sample" of Hebrew
post-exilic), and content.1 Because of the work done by
Collins on the structure of the prophetic bi-colon and by
O'Connor on the line itself (from a more representative
sample--1200 lines), a comparison of the results obtained
from Proverbs and these corpora will provide interesting
similarities and contrasts.
Three sets of analysis will be performed in this
study. First, there will be a comparison, via charts and
discussions, of Collins' results in the prophets and the
structural patterns found in Proverbs 10-15. Although the
magnitude of Collins' prophetic corpus (1900 lines) dwarfs
the proverbial analysis, the convergence of the results in
Proverbs will be able to support a comparison, although
certainly no claims of conclusiveness will be made because
only 88 of the 184 verses analyzed allowed for a direct
collation with Collins' line types.2 A second comparison
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poetry (contra Barr's review of Hebrew Verse Structure JJS,
84 (Spring 1983), p. 118).
1Ibid., pp. 66, 150. Collins attempts to tie
syntactic line-type with a semantic set. This would
suggest another alternative to explain variations rather
than postulating that sectional variations are as
indicative of changes of authorship. He fails to develop
the influence of content as grounds for stylistic variation
in the different sections of Isaiah, for example.
2This should reflect on the lack of
comprehensiveness of Collins' approach, particularly in his
sparse treatment of nominal clauses. Of the 184 verses
treated in Proverbs, 80 were nominal in character (cf. 88
of his A, B, C, D type). Thus, if nominal clauses are
included 168 verses allow for assimilation with Collins'
work.
will be made with O'Connor's line constraint system, which
was able to handle all lines in the corpus. Finally, an
analysis of matching, isomorphisms, and homomorphisms as
well as specific examples of the creative use of syntax
and syntactical transformations by the sages will
demonstrate the value of the tagmemic approach taken
above. It is obvious that all of the interesting
syntactic features cannot be elaborated on within this
paper. Thus, one further goal of this study is to suggest
other directions which could be pursued from the data base
provided in the corpus.
A Comparison of Collins' Prophetic Corpus
with the Proverbial Corpus
The discussion of Collins' work will focus on
several charts which summarize his findings and which
provide a convenient point of analogy with the results
compiled from the proverbial corpus.1 These charts are
descriptive in nature--compiled in an attempt to discover
poetic patterns of equivalence and variation. Since they
provide mere distributions of line types, they should
not be understood in a prescriptive manner as determinative
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1Appendix 1 has the compilation of the Collins
line types found in Proverbs 10-15 along with the frequency and
locations of each type. This list could be used to
discover if there are syntactic-semantic sets in Proverbs
similiar to those found by Collins in the prophets.
of proverbial or prophetic syntactical features. Thus,
all conclusions are tentative and given in terms of
probabilities--thus reflecting the limited size and
varied character of the data bases themselves. This
should not minify the value of the results, for it is
important in any appreciation of literature to recognize
what patterns are "normal" and which are "supra-normal."
The following analysis will provide a scientifically-
specified basis for the determination of archetypical
patterns, thereby removing it from the realm of vague
intuition.1
A Line Type Comparison
Chart 10.1 provides an overview of the results of
Collins' line types (1943 lines) in his prophetic corpus
with what was found after examining 184 lines of
proverbial poetry.2 The chart is divided into three
sections. The top gives the broad results which Collins
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1Pedagogically this data may help those students
who have dull intuitional perceptions to be guided
deictically to significant features they should look for
and which are not as consequential. This type of analysis
then provides an analytic foundation for a better
intuitional reading of the text.
2Cf. Collins, Line-Forms in Hebrew Poetry, p. 195.
One should recall: Line I = contiguous line, Line II =
where the two cola match syntactically, Line III = gapped
matching, Line IV = two different syntactic configurations
in the two cola [A = SV; B = SVM; C = SVO; D = SVOM]. Thus
Collins' system specifies both single and bi-colonic syntax
into an easily accessible format.
CHART 10.1
Comparison with Collins' "General Statistical Survey" [Collins, p. 195]
Line - Type I II III IV Totals
A B C D A B C D A B C D
Collins Totals 7 193 47 253 89 151 124 121 20 201 85 165 487 1943
Collins % 0.4 9.9 2.4 13 4.6 7.8 6.4 6.2 1 10.3 4.4 8.5 25.1 100%
Collins Totals 500 485 471 487 1943
Collins % 25.7% 25% 24.2% 25.1% 100%
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Prov 10-15 Totals 0 1 0 1 5 4 23 0 0 7 8 1 38 88
% 0 1.1 0 1.1 5 4.6 26.2 0 0 8.1 9.2 1.1 43.2 100%
Prov Line-Types
without nom. 2 31 16 38 87
% 2.3% 35.6% 18.4% 43.7% 100%
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Prov 10-15 Totals
for nom. type 3 29 5 43 % 80
% 3.8% 36.2% 6.2% 53.8 100%
Line-Type totals
for Prov 10-15
including nom. 5 60 21 81 168
% 3% 35.9% 12.6% 48.5% 100%
found according to Line-Type [I,II,III,IV] and then
divided into Basic Sentence type [A,B,C,D]. He found a
very stable distribution over the Line-Types in that there
were 500 (25.7%) type I, 485 (25%) type II, 471 (24.2%)
type III, and 487 (25.1%) type IV. A significant
difference is observed when these results are juxtaposed
to Proverbs 10-15 (type I, 2 [2.3%]; type II, 31 [35.6%];
type III, 16 [18.4%]; and type IV, 38 [43.7%]). It is
interesting that when the nominal (nom.) Basic Sentence
type is added, doubling the size of the sample, the
results are similar (type I, 3 [3.8%]; type II, 29
[36.2%]; type III, 5 [6.2%]; and type IV, 43 [53.8%]).
The bottom line of the chart provides a sum of the total
of the nominal plus Collins' basic sentence types--
revealing that there is a substantial contrast between the
prophets and what was found in Proverbs (Line type I:
prophets [25.7%]//proverbs [3%]; Line type II: prophets
[25%]//proverbs [35.9%]; Line type III: prophets [24.2%]
//proverbs [12.6%]; and Line type IV: prophets [25.1%]//
proverbs [48.5%]).
Note that Proverbs' line type distribution is very
uneven, with line types II and IV dominating and line type
I being virtually ignored. Proverbs 10-15 seems to prefer
syntactic repetitions (matching), as demonstrated by the
frequent use of line type II. The fact that Proverbs
avoids line types I and III may show that it favors each
colon's being a separate, independent and complete unit,
rather than, as in the prophets, frequently employing
syntactic contiguity between the cola, as in line type I,
or in a relation of gapping between the lines, as in line
type III. The prevalence of line type IV would confirm
that the sages favored two separate, independent, and
complete syntactical units in their proverbial cola, as
opposed to the prophets, who allowed for more continuity
and syntagmatic relationships between the cola. What has
just been suggested by the data is that the difference
between the prophets and the proverbial-using sages can be
to some extent syntactically specified.
Basic Sentence Frequency Comparison
Another difference is seen in the basic sentences
employed [A = SV; B = SVM; C = SVO; D = SVOP; nom. =
SPsc]. Note that in all of Collins' line types, D is used
rather frequently (Line type I, 253 [13%]; Line type II,
121 [6.2%] and Line type III, 165 [8.5%]). This is not
true in Proverbs 10-15, where in Line type II it was not
found at all and in Line type III it was found only once
(1.1%). Thus, what is being suggested is that the basic
sentence type D (SVOM) was avoided by the proverbial sage
although the prophets utilized it frequently. It may be
that the lengthiness of D was not well-suited to
proverbial tastes. Line weight, however, will be able to
be determined better via O'Connor's line constraint
matrix. It is also significant that A is not heavily used
either in the prophets or in proverbs. Two types of basic
sentences seem to dominate in Proverbs--C (SVO; Line type
II, 23 [26.5%]; Line type III, 8 [9.2%] and as will be
shown later in Line type IV) and nominal (SPsc) types (80
examples--almost as many as A, B, C, and D combined).
Thus, the nominal clause is characteristic of Proverbs
10-15 with C dominant, but trailing somewhat behind. The
prophets, on the other hand, do not seem to be so
dominated by nominal clauses, as Collins gives but scant
treatment of these types.1
A Comparison of Syntactically
Matching Lines
The next three charts will allow for the scrutiny
of patterns of lines which syntactically match (Line Type
II).2 Comparisons will be for basic sentences of types A,
B, and C, with no matches of D found in the proverbial
corpus. In type II A (chart 10.2) four arrangements are
possible (1,1 = SV/SV; 2,1 = VS/SV; 1,2 = SV/VS and 2,2 =
VS/VS). Collins found SV/VS rare and repeated patterns
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1Collins, Line-Forms in Hebrew Poetry, pp.
215-18.
2Cf. O'Connor's discussion in Hebrew Verse
Structure, pp. 391-400. He states that "somewhat over a
third of the lines" of his corpus manifested this trope.
This is about 8% over Collins' findings (25%) and more in
line with Proverbs' 36%.
CHART 10.2
Line Type II A Collins and Proverbs
[Collins, pp. 94, 195]
1,1 (SV/SV) 2,1 (VS/SV)
Collins 22 Collins 20
% 24.7% % 22.5%
Prov 4 Prov 0
100%
1,2 (SV/VS) 2,2 (VS/VS)
Collins 3 Collins 44
% 3.4% % 49.4%
Prov 0 Prov 0
CHART 10.4
Occurrences of Type II C: i) [Collins, p. 210]
A Comparison of Collins and Proverbs results
C. = Collins, P. = Prov
1,1 2,1 3,1 4,1 5,1 6,1
SVO/SVO SOV/SVO VSO/SVO VOS/SVO OSV/SVO OVS/SVO
C. 9 - 33.3% 1 - 3.7% 5 - 18.5% 0 0 0
P. 14 - 60% 0 1 - 4.3% 2 - 8.7% 0 0
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1,2
SVO/SOV SOV/SOV VSO/SOV VOS/SOV OSV/SOV OVS/SOV
C. 2 - 7.4% 2 - 7.4% 2 - 7.4% 0 0 0
P. 0 0 0 0 0 0
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1,3
SVO/VSO SOV/VSO VSO/VSO VOS/VSO OSV/VSO OVS/VSO
C. 0 0 3 - 11.1% 0 0 0
P. 0 0 0 0 0 0
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1,4
SVO/VOS SOV/VOS VSO/VOS VOS/VOS OSV/VOS OVS/VOS
C. 0 0 0 0 0 0
P. 0 0 0 2 - 8.6% 0 0
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1,5
SVO/OSV SOV/OSV VSO/OSV VOS/OSV OSV/OSV OVS/OSV
C. 0 0 1 - 3.7% 0 1 - 3.7% 0
P. 0 0 0 0 0 0
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1,6
SVO/OVS SOV/OVS VSO/OVS VOS/OVS OSV/OVS OVS/OVS
C. 0 0 1 - 3.7% 0 0 0
P. 3 - 13% 0 0 0 0 1- 4.3%
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Total Collins 27 (note Collins has 83 II C ii) types whereas Proverbs has none)
CHART 10.3
Occurrences of Type II B: i) [Collins, p. 209]
A Comparison of Collins and Proverbs
C. = Collins, P. = Proverbs
1,1 2,1 3,1 4,1 5,1 6,1
SVM/SVM SMV/SVM VSM/SVM VMS/SVM MSV/SVM MVS/SVM
C. 10 - 12.3% 1 - 1.2% 7 - 8.6% 3 - 3.7% 1 - 1.2% 1- 1.2%
P. 1 - 25% 0 1 - 25% 0 0 0
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1,2
SVM/SMV SMV/SMV VSM/SMV VMS/SMV MSV/SMV MVS/SMV
C. 2 - 2.5% 7 - 9.8% 10 - 12.3% 8 - 9.9% 0 5- 6.2%
P. 0 0 0 0 0 0
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1,3
SVM/VSM SMV/VSM VSM/VSM VMS/VSM MSV/VSM MVS/VSM
C. 0 0 7 - 8.6% 1 - 1.2% 0 1- 1.2%
P. 0 0 0 0 0 0
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1,4
SVM/VMS SMV/VMS VSM/VMS VMS/VMS MSV/VMS MVS/VMS
C. 0 2 - 2.5% 1 - 1.2% 3 - 3.7% 0 0
P. 0 1 - 25% 0 0 0 0
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1,5
SVM/MSV SMV/MSV VSM/MSV VMS/MSV MSV/MSV MVS/MSV
C. 1 - 1.2% 0 1 - 1.2% 0 0 1- 1.2%
P. 0 0 0 0 0 1 - 25%
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1,6
SVM/MVS SMV/MVS VSM/MVS VMS/MVS MSV/MVS MVS/MVS
C. 0 1 - 1.2% 0 4 - 4.9% 0 3- 3.7%
P. 0 0 0 0 0 0
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Total Collins 81 (note Collins has 70 II B ii types, whereas Proverbs has none)
SV/SV (24.7%) and VS/VS (49.4%) predominate. Notice the
clear prophetic preference for V initial forms. In
proverbs, only four examples of II A were found--all of
which were of the 1,1 (SV/SV) type. Proverbs does not
favor the V initial, but fronts the S element, although
this will have to be substantiated later since four
examples do not provide a sufficient sample. Proverbs
does corroborate Collins' idea that poets favored the
repeated patterns, i.e. the SV elements in the same order
(SV/SV).
With II B types (SVM/SVM; chart 10.3), Collins
makes the following observations:
Lastly, from these line-forms three tendencies have
emerged which can be tentatively proposed as norms for
Hebrew line construction: a) initial V in the first
hemistich, b) initial NP1 in the second hemistich,
c) direct repetition of pattern. Where any two of
these tendencies coincide we get "strong" line-forms,
. . . Lines in which none of these tendencies appear
are unusual and have to be considered as stylistic
deviations.1
One may observe the repetitional pattern in the forms
which appear on the diagonal line of Collins' analysis
(top left to bottom right). He boxes off areas where
these three features do not occur; hence the boxed areas
are lower frequency and are considered stylistic variances
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1Collins, Line-Forms in Hebrew Poetry, p. 105. Cf.
also p. 212 for similar conclusions.
which may be significant.1 Proverbs 10-15 provides only
four examples of II B line types, two of which fall in
Collins' alleged low frequency, stylistically significant
boxes. Four of the eight hemistichs contain an S initial
while only one has a V initial sequence. This points
again to the prophets' V initial and proverbial S initial
syntactical difference. Other conclusions should not be
forced from only four examples.
Chart 10.4 examines II C (VS0/VS0) type lines.
Collins makes the following observations on this chart:
(1) verb initial position is favored; (2) repetition of
pattern (diagonal line) is frequent; (3) the S is often
initial in the second hemistich; and (4) if, after a verb,
two nouns are found in a row the first should be taken as
the subject and the second as the object.2 There is a
marked preference in Proverbs for the form SVO/SVO (60%)
as compared to the prophets (33.3%). The prophets use
more variety in their ordering of elements. It is
interesting that four (13%) out of the 23 examples were
found to violate Collins' principle that in V + N + N
sequences the first noun is the S and the second the O.
Thus column 4 (4,1 VOS/SVO and 4,4 VOS/VOS) provides
another contrast. The low frequency stylistic box finds
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1Ibid., p. 213.
2Ibid., pp. 112, 213.
three examples in Proverbs (1,6 SVO/OVS) while in the
prophets this order was not found. Clearly this form is
stylistic as it is a perfect chiasm. Both Proverbs and
the prophets favor a repetitional ordering, as may be seen
in SVO/SVO (1,1) and OVS/OVS (6,6) on the diagonal line.
The strength of the SV0/SV0 (60%) and the fact that 73% of
the lines have SVO as a member suggest that the SVO is
rather normative for Proverbs, while the prophets employed
a wider and more frequent variation of orderings. The
stricter ordering in Proverbs 10-15 may reflect genre
constraints which are not as stringent in the prophetic
literature. The prophets are much freer in the type of
genre and style they can employ in the communication of
their message. Hence more syntactic variational patterns
are acceptable. Thus what is being proffered is that
genre should be looked at from a syntactic base in tandem
with the semantic and structural approaches of Crenshaw
and others as discussed above. One final observation, as
in II B, the strong S initial position is found in
Proverbs while the prophets favor a V initial. One
wonders if the prophets are closer to narrative, which
clearly favors a V initial, while the sages are more
poetically free from narrative constraints so they prefer
an S first line as normative.
CHART 10.5
Collins' Summary of Statistics for Type IV [Collins p. 163]
i) ii) iii) iv) Totals
A/B 20 - 20 - 40
A/C 9 2 12 - 23
A/D - - 6 - 6
(29) (2) (38) (0) (69)
% 5.8% 0.4% 7.6% 0% 13.8%
B/A 28 3 4 10 45
B/C 24 36 25 2 87
B/D 5 26 16 1 48
(57) (65) (45) (13) (180)
% 11.4% 13.0% 9% 2.6% 36%
C/A 6 2 1 8 17
C/B 21 20 11 8 60
C/D 3 15 14 2 34
(30) (37) (26) (18) (111)
% 6% 7.4% 5.2% 3.6% 22.2%
D/A 1 2 3 7 13
D/B 1 31 5 19 56
D/C 3 56 3 10 72
(5) (89) (11) (36) (141)
% 1% 17.8% 2.2% 7.1% 28.1%
Totals 121 193 120 67 501
% 24.2% 38.5% 23.9% 13.4% 100%
Total Number of A's = 144 (14.4%); B's = 336 (33.5%);
C's = 293 (29.3%); D's = 229 (22.8%)
CHART 10.6
Summary of Statistics for Type IV in Proverbs
i) ii) iii) iv) Totals
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A/B 2 0 0 0 2
A/C 2 0 0 0 2
A/D 0 0 1 0 1
Total (4) (0) (1) (0) 5
% 10.6% 0% 2.6% 13.2%
A/nom. 1 0 0 0 1
Totals (5) 0 1 0 (6)
Total % 6.2% 0% 1.2% 0% 7.4%
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B/A 6 0 0 0 6
B/C 4 1 0 0 5
B/D 0 0 0 0 0
Total (10) (1) (0) (0) (11)
% 26.3% 2.6% 0% 0% 28.9%
B/nom. 7 0 0 1 8
Totals (17) (1) (0) (1) (19)
Total % 21% 1.2% 0% 1.2% 23.4%
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C/A 10 0 0 0 10
C/B 3 0 2 0 5
C/D 1 0 0 0 1
Total (14) (0) (2) (0) (16)
% 36.8% 0% 5.3% 0% 42.1%
C/nom. 13 0 2 0 15
Totals (27) (0) (4) (0) (31)
Total % 33.3% 0% 5% 0% 38.3%
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D/A 0 0 0 0 0
D/B 1 0 0 0 1
D/C 2 0 1 2 5
Total (3) (0) (1) (2) (6)
% 7.9% 0% 2.6% 5.3% 15.8%
D/nom. 0 1 0 0 1
Totals (3) (1) (1) (2) (7)
Total % 3.7% 1.2% 1.2% 2.5% 8.6%
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Totals 31 1 4 2 38
% 81.6% 2.6% 10.5% 5.3% 100%
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Totals
+ nom. 64 2 10 5 81
% 79% 2.5% 12.3% 6.2% 100%
CHART 10.6
Summary of Statistics for Type IV in Proverbs 10-15
nom./A 6 0 0 1 7
nom./B 1 0 1 0 2
nom./C 5 0 2 1 8
nom./D 0 0 1 0 1
Total (12) (0) (4) (2) (18)
% 14.8% 0% 4.9% 2.5% 22.2%
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Total number of A's = 21 (27.7%); B's = 19 (25%);
C's = 28 (36.8%); D's = 8 (10.5%)
Total + nom. number of A's = 29 (17.9%); B's = 29 (17.9%);
C's = 51 (31.5%); D's=10 (6.2%)
nom.'s = 43 (26.5%)
A Comparison of Syntactically Mixed Bi-Cola
The next charts provide data for an analysis
of line type IV which is a bi-colonic mix of basic
sentences (e.g. A/B, C/D etc.). Proverbs had 48.5% of its
bi-colon with this line type (prophets had 25.1%).
Collins' Summary shows that there is distribution of A/X =
13.8%; B/X = 36%; C/X = 22.2%; and D/X = 28.1%. Note that
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